Open Poetry #15 |
falling" in love |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
why do they call it falling in love? because, I don't know about you, but when I fall, it hurts and love shouldn't hurt love shouldn't be something that you "fall" into, something that you trip and stumble into like an accident (although, we sometimes do) love should be something soft it should be sitting down for a surprise lunch, laughing and sharing it should be a phone call in the middle of the afternoon just to say "I love you" and so many other things so, if we're going to "fall" in love let's fall slowly, not quickly that way, if we land our hearts won't break --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Indeed! - that's the way it should be, well expressed, Sven Pen Melissa~ |
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1slippery_lady Junior Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 20Ohio, USA |
I agree whole-heartedly, well said |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Oh that the falling in and out were gentle. Well said Sven. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
OH its a great idea, but for some reason, the fall always hurts either at the beginning or at the end. Nice write my friend. Sandra |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
touche! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The wisdom of this is appreciated, the application of it...elusive. I love the way you write love! |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Very good advice...nicely done Sven! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love Sven...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Ah Sven...so true...if only it could always work that way. ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wise words, Sven.....well done! Nathan |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
If you're going to fall anyway, at least have your arms outstretched in front of you so that you can embrace the resolution. Poignant and well-received, Sven. -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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