Open Poetry #15 |
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The dark sky and I |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
I looked up at the dark sky and smiled. And the dark sky turned purple, and smiled back to me. Laying on the pavement as I was, with no reason to move or speak or change my mood, I breathed in slower. And so the dark sky, full as she was undid her shirt and began to rain. To which I said: “You can’t move me!” To which she said, “I have.” |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, this moves me! Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
What a wonderful first posting...I look forward to many more! Welcome! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing from planet earth Samia...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Samia, and this moves me. Beautiful! Welcome! Maree ![]() |
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Samia Junior Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 47Earth of corse! |
Hi everyone, thanks for the kind words and warm welcomes. I'm glad I found this place. Cheers! Samia |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Samia~ Welcome to the wonderful world of Passions ! A delightfully charming entry you've made. Most enjoyable~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Great first post, Samia. Will be watching for more. Welcome! |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
There's no arguing with nature! ![]() ![]() ~Krista ![]() "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And so the dark sky, full as she was undid her shirt and began to rain. ================================= what a very cool image and metaphor!! Welcome to poetry land Samia, I too look forward to more of your work, nice to have you here with us ![]() jm slow burn ... |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to passions. I look forward to more of your work ![]() |
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