Open Poetry #15 |
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New Life |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Thoughts of a new life fill my head no cries or worries and not a drop of doubt Nothing to hold me back and make me cry out like a baby when times get rough none of that negativity getting in my way no nonsense in my new life no need for dreaming my dreams would be reality and I would have no regrets |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
feelings easily felt yet, I don't think that is life, Trina I enjoyed the feel of this, though, and could identify with the longing/melancholy---you showed it well |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I feel your hope, but don't forget without dreams, we live in a void..... Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Unfortunately, we can't run away from what our life really is. All we can do is attempt to make it better. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ShannonM Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 104Drifitng |
This has a positive and self-affirming ring to it. It would be nice to move ahead in this way and forget all the unpleasant things. ShannonM |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Yes it really would be nice , dreams are nice sometimes but I don't dream for too long. I can't run from what my life really is but if I feel like dreaming or writing what I really wish my life was like then I must do so if it can take my mind off the unpleasant things in my life even for a little while. Thank you all for reading. Take care, Trina |
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