Open Poetry #15 |
The Rescue |
Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The old one leaned back with a gentle smile, Telling the crowd, this will take a small while. My tale today is when the princess did hide, Without the Viking watching or being by. Six of the raider had found her out Standing her before them, the leader had given a shout. …You, my pretty, I’ ll have a taste, then turn you loose for my men to chase. He was taken aback at lack of fear, For a slow smile spread, ever so dear. “Wuv” she said, with shining eyes, leave you me, death meets all who tries. Relieved in spirit he roared to his men, Barking like a dog won’t succor her then. As he began his advance, he was suddenly struck, With the realization, they had just ran our of luck. A sense of caution spun him around to see a venging figure, with sword point in ground. “Wolf” he cried in aching quake, “you are dead Return to Valhalla,” he said with dread. Olaf, you fool, you picked the wrong one, You and your men have seen your last sun. With a cowards rush, Olaf tried to surprise, The singing sword took his head, leaving dead staring eyes. Wolf moved quickly to meet, as his namesake, The princess’s clear voice, battle song she did make Like the snarling beast he met them all, Till four of the others he made to fall. A hard thrown knife ended the fight As the last of the cowards ran in flight. Now, princess, Wolf smiled when he was done. What would have happened if I had not come? She showed a short sword, hidden behind her dress, Dear Wolf, I would have given my very best And I would have won, for you taught me well, So no longer on that subject you will dwell. A booming laugh, he didn’t hide, Nor the facts of his great pride. Reaching out, he took her hand, Then to the ship we go and leave this land If Wolf had been aware of the look on her face, He would have given up then in the lovers race |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like this tale! I would say more, but I think I need to read it again, for a little more lies behind the words than one can take in by first read... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is a unique tale. . . I love the Nordic influence here, reminds me of the tales of Odin and Thor. . . wonderfully done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Another wonderfully spun tale Logan Keep 'em up! I enjoy them a lot! ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
The last two lines especially intrigue me as to the next chapter... -MVS "When you tell the Truth, you never have to remember what you just said." |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
i really liked this poem, keep it up!! we love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I am also going to re-read this, but I know from first read that its great. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--So intriguing it would seem tell us what the look did mean I enjoyed this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Logan, Interesting, enjoyed the read. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Your tale is very intriguing, my gentle friend. I am betting the princess never has to worry about what she would do if the Wolf had not come. He knows when she needs him so he shall be there if he can. I must say, I am loving these. Much to ponder in your tale. Yes, the wheels spin on . . . All writing comes |
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