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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-28 01:03 AM

Love's Promise
~*~
Amazing shimmers stroke the veil of midnights dream
piercing lost images of cherished things
flirting with memories hidden in corners of remembrance
trust secured with the promise of tomorrows full cup

Awakened in rekindled flames of hope
moonlight becomes you covering me
in naked truth, love is made complete
reconciled in the dawn of love's promise
~*~
BloomingRose

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-28 01:07 AM

like this, especially that last line!!!

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-07-28 09:02 AM

Vas~ Thank you much.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-07-28 09:19 AM

Amazing shimmers stroke the veil of midnights dream
===========================

What a beautiful line and image Deb...
you always can find the loveliest poetic phrases and images..
well done poetess

take care
jm

slow burn ...
light a candle for our love
So that we will always be
one on one in lovely love

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-07-28 10:28 AM

I love the lines that you've used here. . . the images that you bring up are just truly wonderful. . . I especially like "moonlight becomes you covering me/in naked truth, love is made complete". . . that's a beautiful image. . .

wonderfully done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-07-28 02:48 PM

BloomingRose~
Now this is just plain gorgeous !

'moonlight becomes you covering me'

Yeahhhhhhh ! Conjures up such a lovely glow~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

6 posted 2001-07-28 03:58 PM

JM~ Very kind words. Thank you so much.

Sven~ Why thank you kind sir!

Margie girl~ Much inspiration comes from reading poems, such as yours.

Thank you.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-07-31 10:17 PM

Deb-
   Wow...I just LOVE this..
   Absolutely gorgeous indeed!.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-07-31 10:25 PM

BloomingRose--
Loved the feeling of this. Very nicely done.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-08-01 10:25 AM

nice

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-08-01 01:12 PM

Lovely, you have some great images in this

I always enjoy your poetic style~

Melissa~

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2001-08-01 01:48 PM

Vicky~ Thanks, hugs back to you.

Poe~ Thank you. Glad you enjoyed.

Van~ Thank you.

Melissa~ Thank you. You are always so kind.

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