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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
voices even before you were there, you were there, a spirit of sorts, a dream, a wish, perhaps just a light from the moon’s beam my mind, it hears sometimes, the tired of your day, or the happy of your moment this same voice tells me I stand firm in your believe, and it pushes that promise of yours a little deeper in my heart It is these non-sounds I hear, sometimes, when a voice comes into my head so clearly, so exactly, I believe that our unspoken thoughts are intertwining you are but a shadow playing hide and seek with me, filling me with your presence your voice does not leave behind any aching, no, you leave behind a calm, quiet, tranquil feel, often connected with that time after lovers have given their all to each other, then reach out to touch, not wanting to leave those moments go, then making this the sweeter part of love-making coming with that gesture of linger into every life, one forever love must come, that being you and I wait |
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
So very beautiful. It makes every woman wish to be her. Just wonderful ... wonderful. Miranda |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely written... and so softly romantic.. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Decaflame, This is so very beautiful. This is such a feeling of peace in this that I just love. Wonderful writing here. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...I wait also...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'your voice does not leave behind any aching, no, you leave behind a calm, quiet, tranquil feel, often connected with that time after lovers have given their all to each other, then reach out to touch, not wanting to leave those moments go, then making this the sweeter part of love-making coming with that gesture of linger into every life, one forever love must come, that being you and I wait' Amazing, decaflame...this is a fantastic poem...I truly enjoyed this! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this too. Very good. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Ah, the linger of Love, the natural and unspoken connectedness so right in it's need, so right in it's afterglow. Enjoyed. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
even before you were there, you were there, a spirit of sorts, a dream, a wish, Ahh, there are spirits and there are spirits, there are dreams and sometimes wishes do come true...very nice thoughtful write, as you usually do..Enjoyed |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your voice does not leave behind any aching, no, you leave behind a calm, quiet, tranquil feel, often connected with that time after lovers have given their all to each other, then reach out to touch, not wanting to leave those moments go, then making this the sweeter part of love-making coming with that gesture of linger ========================= MY OH MY...Deca Deca.... when you are inspired...mmm mmm mmm Linger on poetess flame...linger long...  slow burn ... |
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