Teen Poetry #5 |
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Democracy is Dead |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC ![]() |
I can’t stand the struggle, can’t take it anymore The government feeds the wealthy, and then it starves the poor Corruption in the infrastructure, watch it crashing to the ground Forced to sit, idly by, without making a sound There’s rebellion in my silence, I whisper contradiction Everyday I dream of violence, against those who spread conviction Let’s take the power back, it’s our time to react The feds have gone and raped our trust and broke the sacred pact Constitution’s phony, nothing more than words Promises they cannot keep, it all seems so absurd All men are created equal, and then are treated different How can my life’s worth be based on what I’ve spent The almighty dollar is just a joke Don’t care how many you got, cause you’re still broke Without freedom, we’re all poor Can’t break loose when you can’t find the door It’s a door that they won’t let you through Can’t hold all the cards when they can’t control you Cause it only takes 1 to start a revolution It only takes 1 to create a solution They’re afraid of us, the time has come to unite All those who bear arms, it’s our turn to fight Citizens by day, and guerillas by night I want to go to D.C. and watch the capitol burn They had their chance, but now it’s our turn Tear down the institution, cause it’s time to rebuild Can’t make up for lost time or the blood we’ve spilled Too late to turn your head now Democracy is dead now Watch the fire spread now Start to rebel and watch heads bow Want to start it off then I’ll show you how Cause Democracy is dead, it’s our turn now Guess I got a little political with this one. It happens when I listen to Rage Against the Machine alot. This will eventually be a song. Hope you guys don't hate it too much! "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love it. I love it!! I LOVE IT!!! awesome job Jon. You rock. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Cause it only takes 1 to start a revolution It only takes 1 to create a solution oooooh ooooh! me too! me too!!...this one rocks jon...cant wait for my mp3!!! well done on this one here buddy! ![]() ![]() ![]() WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHY!?!?! |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I liked this one, it is really good, and I agree, there ARE problems with the gov't. A song you say! Well I wish you the best of luck to you and hope to see this on a CD soon. Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Dammit! Cherish stole my fav lines, AGAIN! ![]() Anyway, I liked the poem. I though tyou did an awesome job on it, pulling ideas fromt he constitution etc etc...But as for the statement as a whole, I do not agree. I think Americans need to live in another country for awhile just to see how good they actually have it. Nothing is perfect. But damn we have it pretty danm good compared to most. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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