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fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-08-27 10:21 PM

Heart and Face

Which is mask
Face or Heart
A crack to let You
  peek into
    My Little World
Heart or Face

Which is saying
                and
Which is doing

Preacher wants the truth(heart)
  while asking for the motivation(face)
and the truth is
My love, I love Your love
With my Face, and with my Heart

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-08-27 10:34 PM

ooooh ! another good piece from you oz!..i liked this one a lot..and the format was great too...very well done here!

Piece you life together and you WILL find holes.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

2 posted 2001-08-27 10:55 PM

Yet another great poem graces the halls of this fine place..........yeahhhhhh. Well, all screwyness aside, this poem was great. I agree with cherish on the format, really good, I hope to reply to more!

Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-08-28 01:21 PM

I thought this was pretty well written, but it wasn't my fav. from you. Anyhow, I did enjoy this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

4 posted 2001-08-28 02:39 PM

I liked this alot the format was great, but like the other said .. not my fav from you but a good read!

Andrea

*You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun!

*gurls are sweet, Gurls are nice, but im the gurl with whip cream and ice

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

5 posted 2001-08-28 03:35 PM

Incredible symbolism, foz, and written in such a beautiful manner too.

"Preacher wants the truth(heart)
  while asking for the motivation(face)
and the truth is
My love, I love Your love
With my Face, and with my Heart"

This stanza was my favorite in the entire piece. Quite deep and full of thought, yet short. I personally like this one a lot.

Well done.

°L.§.W.°

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