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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-08-26 01:41 AM

Hey guys, i know i havent posted any poems for a while but my life has been so hectic...and i know this definately isnt one of my best but this is how im feeling right now and i think its important to get it out...

You would do anything for her,
You would of granted every wish and command.
Now your with me,
And i just dont understand.

How come im not that special?
Was it something i said or did?
I was with you by your side all along,
Am i just something you ended up with?

How come you loved her imperfections,
And catch me on all mine.
How come for her you'd smile for a thousand years,
And sometimes im just a waste of time...?

What did i do wrong here...,
I just loved you is that bad?
You'd never do half of these things to her,
You would never wanna see her sad.

For me its no different,
Wether i have a smile on my face or a frown.
You know you could always have me,
I'll always and always have been around.

All this wear and tear has got me thinking,
You do know you ruined all the inner strength i worked for.
It wont be too long until the time comes,
That i'll be the one you cant have but adore.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-08-26 01:48 AM

OOooo Loved the ending on this one.
Awesome write here.
Glad to see you posting.
Thanks for the read.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-08-26 05:58 PM

Your poem is very sad and I'm sorry that's what your going through because I know how much it sucks.But I hope everything gets better for you and I loved this poem is was great.Keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-08-26 11:50 PM

Thanks guys

Im glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to read and reply!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-09-03 02:27 AM

I liked this one. Well done here, you should post more often. Looking forward to read more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Jose Marti
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 374
washing DC

5 posted 2002-02-14 03:06 PM

great poem

he probably smiles about you behind your back and while you're not noticing
and he loves you for all of your imperfections too
but he keeps that to himself
or at least hides it form you
or maybe you already are the one he adores,
and he acted this way around her and will be that way withthem all
but maybe Im just shouting into the wind

Muffy
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 4

6 posted 2002-02-14 06:39 PM

Hey that was a good poem It really made me think of my x boyfriend who i stilled cared for long ago. Thanx for posting on my poem I loved yours! write more when you get a chance

[This message has been edited by Muffy (02-14-2002 06:40 PM).]

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

7 posted 2002-02-14 07:18 PM

It's nice to read a poem from you again, I'm sorry that you are feeling this way, *hugs* I wish I could add more comforting words but my words are failing me now..I do hope all works out..*hugs*

Kristen

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

8 posted 2002-02-14 10:43 PM

Shugah~WOW great work here!!! This was a piece that i really like alot!!! Thanks for sharing...

~ShAtTeReD mEmOrIeS,
aRe AlL i HaVe LeFt,
Of YoU aNd Me.~

aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

9 posted 2002-02-15 03:41 AM

Hey hun, I'm sorry you feel this way. Us guys can be funny like that, we always seem to want the thing we can't have. (shrugs). This was a very nice write though and I really liked the ending.

Maybe you should try telling him how you feel.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2002-02-15 01:52 PM

Aww guys thank you so much...i have no idea where this poem came from tho lol...it just randomly got replied to and i posted it in august

LOL ironically enough i feel the same exact way and i was just about to write a poem about feeling that way but then i saw someone replied to one of my old ones and here i am...life's funny like that

mE & cHrIsTiNe GaVe A WhOlE nEw mEaNiNg tO ThE wOrD "iNcOgNiTo"

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