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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-08-24 11:12 PM

The way we kiss,
In a nighfull bliss,
Everything freezes,
From just that kiss.

The way we kiss,
Makes me feel free,
Can u feel the breeze,
And hear the trees.

The way we kiss,
Makes everything so small,
When we kiss our bodies embrace,
I want to faint when I see your face.

The way we kiss,
Nothing will ever change,
Me looking into your eyes,
Forever hoping im with you till I die.

Short but sweet the first in many ive wrote, ive been away with a virus on my computer but im back now Hi guys.

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-08-25 01:05 PM

this is very good! i liked it a lot. pretty good for being away for a while and i totally hear ya on the virus thing. i got one. sucks don't it?

Valerie

"...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-08-25 01:27 PM

My computer is virus free!!!! HEHE. :knock on wood: So anyway, I really liked this poem. It wasnt rusty, so dont worry about that. You did a nice job.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-08-31 12:13 PM

I thought you did just fine here Branden...but it wasn't your best. Anyhow, I did like it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-08-31 01:50 AM

i enjoyed this one. im with dopey though, it isnt as great as sum of your others but its good enough to be enjoyed lots!

............Daffodils
........Daffodils .....
....Daffodils..........
Daffodils .............

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-08-31 08:35 AM

I hate viruses!! Grrr!!!

But anyway, welcome back, this poem was very sweet.

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

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