Teen Poetry #5 |
hate or love |
SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
Hate? or Love? I don't know whether to hate you or to love you. One minute I'll love you because you act like you love me. But the next minute you go and just leave me behind. If only you would not forget about me.Then I could love you no matter what. You say you'll do things with me. Instead you go and do stuff with other people. You are my father so I should love you no matter what. But the things you do make me want to hate you. So, should I hate you? Or should I love you? *You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ok...no. If the least of your worries is "My father does stuff with other people rather than me" than deary, believe you me, you have nothing to complain about. I understand it hurts and all- But he could be doing some REALLY bad things. You don't HATE him, you are just hurt. Tell him. I liked the poem. You expressed yourself well. Thanks for the read. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is a really hard situation I'll tell you what respect is given to people who show them back Hope things do get better between you and your dad no matter what, he's still your dad thanks for the read hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a good poem. I have been through this situation with a friend before and it was hard. But it being your dad must make it that much harder. I hope things work out. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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