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Friendless Misery |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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My heart is hollow and my soul is empty with out all of you here what am I left with? Nothing- nothing but shattered dreams and broken promises An unexplainable hurt that can't be cured With every passing hour I sink deeper in my hole I hate it here I just want to go home I can't ever have my way now my life's been ripped apart I hold onto our memories they're all I've got... I can't believe this happened to me A friendless world is misery The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your right a world without friends is full of misery but sometimes if you have to many friends you feel lonely.This poem is really good it's one of the best i've ever read so keep up the great work! Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Hehehe I think your signature can be applied here. Look around you, I'm sure you're not in the place you think you are, some body just painted the walls to make it look that way. Take care Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I think I've been there before. It gets better. No sarcasm. Bel |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is a very emotional poem and I sympathise greatly, I really liked it because I can relate to it so much. My friends disowned me when I got a boyfriend - they had a real problem with him even though they could see he was lovely and tat I was so happy . So even if this is not that kind of msg I would say its best to be friends with anyone and make EVERYONE smile rather than just someone. "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. this one hit home. I went through a time not too long ago when something really trying happened in my life, and I discovered who my real friends were. Just remember.. everything happens for a reason. *hugs* It may be hard... but things'll only get better. Nicely done here.. the emotions throughout this piece are very strong. I enjoyed this. Keep posting all your work.. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hmmmm, are you homesick? hope things to cheer up soon be strong and keep that head up always thanks for the beautiful read keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
That was a very good poem. I liked it. Those are terrible feelings to have. Hope things get better. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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