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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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Emptiness consumes me Darkness overwhelms me Everyone has tried, but no one here can help me It’s so hard to bare this pain Lay awake at night in shame As tears crash to my pillow like rain Ignorant mistakes, I can’t believe I tried Tearing at my heart, emotional suicide Being murdered from within Guilty conscience from a life of sin If you want to know what hell is like Just step into my skin I can feel no more Dreams are rich, but my life is poor I cannot stand this nightmare called reality Want to gouge out my eyes so I can no longer see Insatiable hunger for what’s never there A taste of life without restraints, pain, or despair And so I starve, blown away with the wind It’s hard to start over when you can’t find the end With no finish in sight my pace begins to slow When I hold myself back I can’t continue to grow As I stand in indecision I begin to mold It’s time to toss me out cause I’m growing too old I’m rancid, rotten, spoiled Just a piece of trash Throw me out as you always do I will sit in my landfill of pain Just a piece of trash Never to be seen again Never to have another chance Never to start over I can feel no more Dreams are rich, but my life is poor I cannot stand this nightmare called reality Want to gouge out my eyes so I can no longer see "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow Jon, sounds like you've been listening to some NIN too.....very emotional write very expressive. I hope you are ok, and this is just a flow of thoughts. If you need someone to talk to, scream at, whatever, I'm here ok?  |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Sounds like you're going through very trying times. I hope all is okay... Nicely done here. The emotions in this piece are portrayed very well. Nice work. If you need someone to talk to, fetl free to email me --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem has very strong emotions I loed it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"I’m rancid, rotten, spoiled Just a piece of trash Throw me out as you always do I will sit in my landfill of pain Just a piece of trash Never to be seen again" Oh, and my fav... "If you want to know what hell is like Just step into my skin" VERY awesome write! so dark and emotional. Powerful as hell! I LOVED it. I loved pissed off, depressed, blunt writing. They are my favs. You are an incredible writer! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Thanks Spice, and I am glad to always get your opinions, where's your poetry at? I haven't seen any in a while, and your writing kicks ass too! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
It’s time to toss me out cause I’m growing too old I’m rancid, rotten, spoiled Just a piece of trash Throw me out as you always do wow....it feels as though i HAVE been in your skin jon... i relate to this one a lot- so much so it sounds like sumthing im working on right now. it did sound like a song too like sea said...maybe nine inch inspired? its a very raw and emotional write. i like it lots! Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
*click* Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like you're going thru tough times. Just be strong, things will get better. Keep your head up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, talk about an emotional write. Very dark here. I really hope you are doing ok. Well done on the poem though .  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
I really loved this. Sometimes you just feel like that inside... It was great. Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
bump! The feeling of Sleepiness when you're not in bed, and can't get there, is the meanest feeling in the world.-- Edgar Waston Howe |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Wow, where did this one come from? Thanks Cherish! "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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