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Don't cry
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Don't cry |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Don’t lie, Oh no don’t lie. Don’t erase, Oh no don’t erase. Don’t cry, Oh no don’t cry. Don’t speak, Oh no don’t speak. But just listen to me, when I say Don’t cry, don’t be so sad, You’re prettier than that. Don’t cry, don’t be so shy, You’ve got no reasons to lie. Don’t cry, don’t cry Don’t fade, Oh no don’t fade. Don’t close, Oh no don’t close But just listen to me, When I say. Don’t cry, don’t be so sad, You’re prettier than that. Don’t cry, don’t be so shy, You’ve got no reasons to lie. Don’t cry, don’t cry. You always shine so bright But I guess you don’t see it. You’re beautiful as the night But I guess you don’t believe it. Dry your eyes, and listen to me, When I say. Don’t cry, don’t be so sad, You’re prettier than that. Don’t cry, don’t be so shy, You’ve got no reasons to lie. Don’t cry, don’t cry. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This poem is really good and I really love it.Keep up the grea work. Lauren |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Aww. That was sweet. Great job! I would like to know who exactly you are talking to in this. *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ya know- I never understood why my mom told me I was "Too Pretty to cry." HaHa... ANYWAY I liked the poem. It was sweet. Keep posting.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I didn't much like the style of this one. Not my favorite by you, but the message of it was nice.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I'm guessing this is a song.. Correct me if I'm wrong. This is a very different, unique style from what I've normally seen from you. I didn't like it as much as the other work, but I still enjoyed this nonetheless. Nice work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Yeah I'm with Fading Away. As a poem I'm with dopey , but I think this could make a great song. Very nice thoughts here. Good work Jason 'Every body has their destiny... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...the message is indeed nice...good job on the poem ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This had a song effect on me. Beautiful write my friend. keep it up. hope to see more hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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