Teen Poetry #5 |
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SunShine913![]()
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC ![]() |
I can taste the heat of his lips on mine smoldering tongues entwine ~ I can feel his fingers stroke my skin Oh, baby touch me again ~ I can smell the musk of his cologne If only I wasn’t lying here all alone *You only live once, so live it to the fullest and have fun! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhh, another I like very much!! yes, I know this ![]() ![]() |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!... this brought a smile to my face..oh my i raise my hand at being guilty of that!! ![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for sharing! "Kiss my Starfish! |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this one A LOT... the ending completely blew me away. Very nicely done! Keep posting all you work! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Another great poem I loved it! Lauren |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
AWESOME!!!! The ending was AWESOME!!! This was short, but the impact was incredible! Such an unexpected turn at the end. Wow! I loved htis bunches upon bunches!!! You pulled me in and then smacked me. haHaHa... MORE!!! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty nice poem. Made me think about something...anyway...I enjoyed it a lot. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
ohhh! thats the worst, being alones a killer! Dont worry theres light at the end of the tunnel *lol* i promise! Good write though, liked the twist at the end! G'Work ALLIE |
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