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Life of Battle
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Life of Battle |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
In the abundance of water The fool is thirsty A fool now go thirst, in a world full of sea You haven't seen suffering until you've seen me Running about, searching for personal lee How foolish can one be Ah, but I'm one man Living in the desert Food doesn't grow in sand My Lord, You've got me fighting on the front line the way I must walk The blind may see how fine... This fate that is mine... "Why do you persecute me?" Do I have to be blinded by what you're saying Blinded to see, how goes victory I don't fight flesh and blood I fight to survive the pain My heart asks my mind "How long can you stay sane?" I wonder if the left is the right lane I feel my strength It's beginning to wane I suffer so long looking for my enemy... I torture myself, to God I beg Am I still yet blind? Is looking for my enemy What I can't see IS my enemy? Have I looked so far He's right behind me? One Life to live, but yet One life to give Life is short, and soon it will be passed I've found my enemy Now, what have I done Will my many actions be remembered Life is short and soon it will be past What have I really done in my battle Will my so called victories For just one day yet last? "Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your right life is a battle and you never know when it's going to be over.SO you might as well try and enjoy it while you still can.But anyway great poem keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This isn't the best I've seen from you. The content was very confusing in come places... didn't make much sense. Anyways, I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing... keep posting your work. --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Ah thank you! =) Don't take it so seriosly and you won't be confused. I write alot of nothing most of none of the time  "Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon |
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