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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-17 07:55 PM

Why do I always seem to mess up things?
Someone's having fun pulling strings.
Never before have I felt this way,
Praying that with me you'll stay.
Don't want to lose you,
For you anything I would do.
Nothing can compare to your beauty,
Most gorgeous you are truely.
Knowing I'm in the way,
You not wanting me to stay.
Maybe I should go,
But then what would that show?
I can't run and watch you slip away,
Cause I know we'll be fine one day.
That day will come soon,
We'll be sitting under the golden moon.
I can not leave,
No magic tricks up my sleave.
Just the promise of endless love,
Minus all that push and shove.
Not promising we'll never fight,
But fights aren't close in sight.
Never shall I ever yell,
Only my love for you I shall tell.
I love you with all my heart,
And beyond death do us part.

Only darkness falls on those without souls

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

1 posted 2001-08-17 08:14 PM

this is very sweet.....sometimes its hard loving someone that doesnt show the love back anymore....but im sure everything will work out

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-08-20 11:11 PM

Aww.. this is a sweet write.
"Never shall I ever yell,
Only my love for you I shall tell."
I liked the rhyme scheme. You did a fine job here... good luck with the situation. I hope all works out for the best

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-08-21 12:41 PM

                                                                Only my love for you I shall tell.
                                                                I love you with all my heart,
                                                               And beyond death do us part.

this is really really sweet!!!..sounds like youre ready for marriage buddy!...i loved the flow this poem had you did very well with it! thanks for the great read!

"Kiss my Starfish!
My chocolate Starfish punk!"
-'Hot dog'
Limp Bizket

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

4 posted 2001-08-21 12:46 PM

this is a beautiful write!
it really touched me
i hope you dont mind if i slip this into my library

Whatever tomorrow brings I'll be there, with open arms, and open eyes ~Incubus~

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-08-22 04:38 PM

Very beautiful poem I loved it keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

6 posted 2001-08-24 03:12 PM

well thank ya guys, sorry it takes so long to reply im not on a lot and no i dont mind if ya add it to your library

Only darkness falls on those without souls

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