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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Why..... Do I have to say goodbye. Why..... Can't I think about the summer and not begin to cry. Why..... Does the summer have to end. Why..... Wont the scares on my heart mend. Why..... Am I scared of going back to school. Why..... Do I constantly break all the rules. Why..... Couldn't I have lived my life a better way. Why..... Am I not sure I want to live another day. Why..... Will my life never the same. Why..... Do I ask "why" when I only have myself to blame! Lauren |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
This is really good. I like the end especially, but the question of Why is one that never seems to fade with time. Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I know how that feels. W always ask why, and usualy get no answers to the questions that matter most. Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
wow, that's really good. Exactly how I feel, and prob. many others, wow, that's, well, what's a word better than really good. FANTISTIC POEM Sam |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
wow, this is really strong. I liked it a lot cant wait to see more  You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is probably one of my favs from you, Lauren. Why... I hate that one word question. It sounds like you're going through very trying times. I hope all turns out well. Nice write.. I really liked the last few lines. Well done! --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oyyy girl..u hit home with this one..i swear i asked myself at least half of these questions if not all over the last week...especially the school one and breaking the rules...so true...i hope you get the answers to all of your "whys"... |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Ah yeah, you know I gotta bump this one to the top again :P Nice post If everyone demanded peace instead of another television set, then there'd be peace - John Lennon |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
This was really good, I must admit I'm a bit of a "why?" and "what if?" fan... so i can realte to this! G'work! ALLIE |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Yes, this was great! The ending was awesome! I have this problem alot in my life so I totally connected with it. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Lauren~ Wow! I liked this poem alot Jezzika be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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