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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-10-09 08:33 PM

So many broken promises,
I don't know what's true anymore.
I've taken all your things,
and flung them out the door.
As you stand there staring,
I begin to wonder if you ever cared.
These feelings of love,
I thought we both shared.
But I guess I was wrong,
there's nothing I can do.
I'm now ready to go on,
and spend my life without you.
My life may become boring,
but at least I won't have these problems.
Or if I do,
now I know how to solve 'em.

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~...I can be ur hero baby, I can kiss the pain away...~

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

1 posted 2001-10-09 10:05 PM

I liked this a lot. I relate to it as well. You did wonderfully expressing this.

Nice work.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

2 posted 2001-10-10 12:05 PM

OMG!!!! I loved this, I felt the emotion in this poem. It's so going in my library!

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

3 posted 2001-10-10 03:50 AM

it shows courage to be able to do that a lot of people are afraid. great poem too. keep it up.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-10-10 09:46 AM

always wanted to fling stuff out at someone who hurt me....never did though LOL this is good

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-10-10 01:33 PM

Flinging things is fun, Susan. You should really try it sometime. LOL

Lots of emotion in this. I hate to think that someone hurt you this badly. Keep your head up and thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

~gretchenp34~
Junior Member

since 2001-10-08

Posts 46
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2001-10-10 03:07 PM

Thats a really good poem! you got me thinkin

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

7 posted 2001-10-10 04:03 PM

Nice! It does take courage to get over love and see what is really there! You are a strong person for that. Awsome poem!

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

8 posted 2001-10-10 05:30 PM

Veyr nice poem

...I can picture it too!

I'm a professional happy puppet.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

9 posted 2001-10-10 06:39 PM

Good poem! im glad ur feelings changed about this guy even tho im not sure who it is. good write. lylas ~Jess~

~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-10-12 10:27 AM

This was a really good poem...its horrible to see things happen like this and its very hard to deal with. Stay strong hun, your better off without him if he couldnt make you happy..::hugs::

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

11 posted 2001-10-12 05:40 PM

OMG!!! this was a kewl poem!! and it wasnt as depressin as usual either!! good job stac!!! ~*@!krista!@*~

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

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