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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-08-15 01:24 PM

they are connected...

Live are the dead
living in glory
dead are the living
living dead
eyes open reathing
dead mindns dead hearts
thinking breathing
living in shame shame of the dead

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

NIght has no end
day is night
night with light
sleep never ends
wake is sleep
people walking
sleep
eyes open
closed
life of glory
flowers birds
bloom sing

If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-08-15 04:35 PM

OMG! This is awesome. The last part, I guess it would be "G" is amazing. Truthfully one of the best pieces I feel I have ever read from you Regina. I totally agree with every aspect of that poem. In the library, again!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

2 posted 2001-08-15 08:30 PM

i'll have to second the OMG cuz this is really great, very cool. i liked this a lot great work here

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-18 11:52 PM

I LOVED the second one. VERY impressive, Regi. NIcely done... Can't wait to read more!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-08-25 06:42 PM

I thought they were ok. Not your best, but still quite the strong pieces here. Hope to read more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

5 posted 2001-08-26 12:30 PM

I really liked both of these, but "G" was definetly my fav. Its hard to think of a title huh? Good thing the alphabet is always there for ya!

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-09-07 02:27 PM

Different from you but definitely interesting. I don't think you've ever written a bad piece. They are always so good and full of meaning.

Keep sharing them.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-09-08 01:20 AM

well written...both were nicely done...LOVED the second one...GREAT job!

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

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