Teen Poetry #5 |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
a heart so pure a love so true my soul was incomplete until i knew you -bergundy- maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio- [This message has been edited by fearing-laughter (04-06-2002 02:58 AM).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
fearing-laughter- Oh...I really like this! ![]() Love the happy feeling it brings, with just a few, carefully chosen, words. Nicely done. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was so cute. Short and sweet and so adorible. I liked this a lot! iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf.. |
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PurplePeopleEater Junior Member
since 2002-01-04
Posts 11 |
yay bergy wee wee! i love you lol. it was pretty. happy happy day. -Dani- |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem tks for sharing! robin i am me don't tell me different!! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
That just said it all.. it's kind of funny how one person has the power to bring everything together... to fill the voids. I liked this one. Thanks for posting. Think about it. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yes. I agree with DE...one person so capable of filling voids. Unbearably also able to create them. Jenn "I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about." |
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twitchy New Member
since 2002-05-29
Posts 4 |
who be this m? hehe..oh well..look at the icon!!!!! m Sanity now and beyond me |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
great poem! with juz a few succint words u made my day. happiness can be contagious |
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