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Little_White_Flowers Junior Member
since 2002-01-27
Posts 23 |
This verse has in its lines a life lost in love, listin to it sing of a lovely death. Across the awakened waters, poetry dances to the sound of the robin welcoming spring. We meet time, a poet, a sprig of written reflection. Her writings bring upon the rejoice of the old hummingbird. Agian refreshed spring gladly lets loose his lilac meadows with ryhme he is a muse. In complete reverence winter falls. I BREATHE |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
This is very STRONG poetry, I really like all the (Metathors) sorry if it's spelled wrong!!! Really enjoyed the read, very nice emotions too. Best Wishes, Brian. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it. Well written and powerful. Post more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I like the use of metaphors used here. I'd really look forward to reading more of your work!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Beautifully written....amazing feeling Loved it and keep it up!Sometimes I get so weird |
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