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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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collaboration with a Jake (my neighbor), ill let you figure out which verses belong to which person. Caught up in a pain I should never have experienced bound and gagged thrown in the hands of unmerciful men beaten and stroked by the hands of an angel Thoughts of sin race through my mind let me die, the pain is unbearable talk me through it don't leave me all alone its been a year and a month since you killed yourself its been a year and a month that i changed my mind leave me alone I don't want anyone anymore It's been a year since I lost you I know she died but why have you left me to dangle in the wind Regina, come back to me your tortured look makes me want too weep for all you have lost It has been a week since you last scard your arms It has been 3 years since you truly have smiled Why won't you let me help? God only knows she was my bestfriend too Can't you leave it alone she's dead i'm not she pulled the trigger i was too scared It hasnt been so long since i smiled i smiled just today All i want you to do is bring her back so i wont feel dead. Regina & Jake If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Ina, that was awesome. Very touching. I loved it. You sort of make me want to cry. I know how you feel though.  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Wow! Well, I came here just for a second, saw your poem and read it. Now I have to leave depressed. Regina, that was a very nice poem, and extremely sad. It's hard losing someone to suicide, I have been there. Great poem and I hope you are doing OK Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, Regi. Very powerful... had to sit a while to think about this one. Hit hard... I hope all is well with you. It sounds like you're going through trying times, unless thats just the type of poetry you always write. I hope that's the case. I think the first verse is yours... that was my first guess. Tell me if I'm wrong, though  Awesome work. I really enjoyed this one..--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty powerful, i enjoyed this one. If you ever figure out the title then you should tell me hehe. These untitled letter thingies dont make sense....well not to me. Anyhow, well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Holy crap! Amazing piece here and a truly magnificant collaboration between the two of you. It's such a sad piece. My favourite part would have to be the third section. "All i want you to do is bring her back so i wont feel dead." What a great ending. You should be really proud of this, Regi for you have done yourself proud. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
oMg...this is an amaizng piece...VERY well written and powerful, sad as its feeding the brain some thouights ...ENJOYED greatly.if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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