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Choosing You
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Choosing You |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
Choosing you would... make me have to let him go. Choosing you would... mean for me to betray your brother. Choosing you would... mean to not believe in my best friend. Choosing you would... be like I was braking my own promise. Choosing you would... be the most unsure decision. Choosing you would... be wrong and in my heart I know it. So choosing you is what I not dare to do. But I will continue to stand by you. I will be there as a friend and I hope that after all is said and done, Choosing you would would be the choice well done. You are what you make yourself out to be. :) |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
i liked this one. i think its very good. although i got confused at the last line. still good job here It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Yea, I was gonna say, the last line kinda confused me *sigh* Great poem, tho  ~Tamma "A friend's shoulder makes a |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
woa, this must be way confusing! I feel so sorry for you... I know what its like to not know who to like/love, made a wonderful poem though! nice work. aLLIE |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
Thanks everybody for yuor replies. I know on the last line it was a litle xonfusing but it is easily expolained! "Choosing you would... be wrong and in my heart I know it" This is because I know I don't like him and I was just going to go wiht him because of something else. So if your wondering, i said no and we are still friends!! Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love wiht it. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
 Good decision! If one person can ruin all that you listed, then it's by far not worth it. I enjoyed this one... and like I said, good decision! It's always hard to choose between the guy and the other people you care about. It's always good to have a good head on your shoulders... sounds like you do. Nicely done!--Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Yes, Wise decision. Relationships come and go- Friendships are there through it all. I enjoyed this bunches. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Great poem! It's like you knew exactly what I'm feeling. There's this one guy and everyone's always like "you can do better than him" and I always say "if I can do better, then I don't want to".  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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