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the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-06-28 04:21 PM

just another sci-fi thriller
were searching for the unknown killer
lookout he could be anywhere
and we wouldn't know he's there

Sci-Fi thriller
lookin for the killer

r2d2 on the scene
c3po with his senses keen
hunting down the emperors legions
in all the wrong regions

sci-fi thriller
lookin for the killer

chewy and luke by our side
oh where could our killer possibly hide
was it the phatom or maybe the blob
don't worry sherlock holmes can do the job

sci fi thriller
lookin for the killer

checkin the crime scene with wolfman jack
run to the front don't look back
godzilla and kong over in the corner
shaggy going to the city courner

sci fi thriller
lookin for the killer...

join us next week same bat channel same batplace for the conclusion of sci fi thriller

do the boys find the KILLER
or does the KILLER find the BOYS

evil laugh

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP this is a test of the emergency broadcast system if this were and actuall emergen.........

sorry guys lol in a goofy mood

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

1 posted 2001-06-28 06:05 PM

This is a really cute poem. I'm a big Star Wars Fan, and I liked it.

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~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

2 posted 2001-06-28 07:28 PM

i like you weird style of poetry, i once had nothing to write, so i made a poem a poem about the nutrition facts of milk, although i don't think people would like it that much because it is very bland and boring...

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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3 posted 2001-06-28 08:02 PM

this is so cute! it reminded me a lot of the rocky horror picture show opening theme, "science picture, double feature"...but that's one of my favorite movies, so i really like your poem!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-28 09:09 PM

Very different... To tell you the truth, I didn't like it. I don't really know why... I've seen better from you.
Thanks for sharing this, keep posting all your work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-06-28 10:13 PM

Your poem is cool because it's different keep up the great work!
Lauren

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-06-29 12:52 PM

ummm...interesting..LOL...cute..i think...well..great job!...mr.goofy

...bye..

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-06-29 07:41 AM

I really don't like this. Your goofy mood must be very odd.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

8 posted 2001-06-29 07:59 AM

hey at least you guys are honest lol, I don't recall what i was doing lol.

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-06-29 03:38 PM

I was thinkin that the flow broke off a bit, but this is supposed to be goofy, which it was. I approve of your goofiness. Long live goofiness.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

10 posted 2001-06-29 07:43 PM

HaHa- Okay...I liked this one. A break from all the serious stuff I've been reading from people. I loved how you brought together all these T.V. characters and movie characters and stuff. Cute stuff. The rhyming was cool too. Keep 'em coming.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-07-01 04:24 PM

Very enjoyable read. I love it

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