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Teen Poetry #5

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Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

0 posted 2002-04-03 08:53 PM

Everyday,
I wake up,
to a life.

A life,
I wish I,
never had.

For it is nothing,
but heartake,
and pain.

Pain so horrid,
in whih I,
cann't explain.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2002-04-05 12:32 PM

Baby_Angel123-
Another very sad write...you've expressed the
emotions well.
I truly hope this is not written from your
true feelings. If it is, I hope things get
better for you soon.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

2 posted 2002-04-05 05:48 PM

Aww hun...i cant tell you how many times i've woken up to the same thing. Be strong...::hugs:: im here for you if you need to talk...xitalysbabyx@aol.com

iTs bEeN 1 Of ThOsE dAyZ 4 2 MaNY dAyZ nOw..I jUst NeEd a DaY whErE tHe WOrLd cAn tAkE cArE of ItsElf..

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

3 posted 2002-04-05 09:52 PM

So much sadness on the blue pages tonight. So much...heartfelt pain. *hugs* to you...

~And this too, shall pass.~

Nice write.

Jenn

"I can't get you out of my head- your love is all I think about."

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

4 posted 2002-04-06 08:17 PM

*hugs* was that true emotion? you portrayed the feelings well. nice write

*Erica*

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