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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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The Distance Sitting on the chair in my room a feeling of dread consumes me after not recieving an answer or some sort of sign of life everything falls aparty the tears fall the ache slices into my very soul please don't be dead I sob uncontrobbally while i think for the first time in almost a year I fall to my knees and pray the prayers in hebrew of forgiveness and protection God, I hope you haven't taken him away from me I won't live I won't try, I swear that to you that it will be finshed A friend told me it was just paronia that my love is alright I don't believe her the pen trembles in my hand as I write this to you God we made a deal that i wont slit my wrists if you promise to never leave me I won't give into my pain all of a sudden an email is opend with words that save me . Regina M.A. Levy |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow.....thank God for that e-mail then huh? I hope all is well. Geesh, these poems always make me worry *hugs* Hope all goes ok regi.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
omg wow this one was good! if you ever need some one to talk to i'm here you may not know me well but i can be a good friend just ask dopey hehe! robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow.....this gripped my heart....I hope you are ok....let me know if you ever need to talk....I'm an email away ok?  "Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. everything happens for a reason, huh? I really liked this one... had a hard impact on me. Thanks for sharing this with us... --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh my...WOW! That is all I can say. You have captured every emotion possible with this piece and it is mind blowing. It fully tugged on my heart strings and your ending is fantastic. Definitely one of my faves from you. Keep 'em coming. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wOW~...i esp liked how you discribed... "the pen trembles in my hand as I write" this whole piece was expressed sO well...LOVED the read...ending, just awesome. if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ina, you're a bit walking past the line on this one  Never do anything stupid, you know that's not even an option talk to me and thank Gof for the e-mail *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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