Teen Poetry #5 |
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Crossed Paths |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time ![]() |
I worked hard to gain your trust just to be rejected, Frequently ignoring me what skill you have perfected. I sit sometimes and wonder why you do the things you do, Can’t you see the pain in me I feel lonely too. Weekend after weekend alone in my own life, Awakened by my screaming as you stabbed me with the knife. Our paths were crossed at one time I’m glad you were my friend, But now I feel that our forked paths will bring that to an end. Once more I find an empty path with naught but my blue pen, And I stay tall though I fall and hope our paths do cross again. " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very strong words here. Well done on the poem Kaos, I'm looking forward to more. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
you know what...i could have swore this was my poem...cuz every word pertains to me and Jeremy...the weekends...the way i feel... omi..im gonna lose my cool...very nice write!!!!!! "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Michael, nice write. You've expressed yourself well with some really heartfelt lines in there too. well done. thanks for sharing. ![]() ~AF~ Please put waste in a bin |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this i great it hits you hard(if that makes any sense) i like the way it flows. well done keep it up. |
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