Teen Poetry #5 |
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Love is all you need, Meg |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Love is such a journey thy heart speaks to me I ask where does it lead old man he speaks purely bliss ist thy name do not dare to call as shivers run down my spine I say where does it lead my friend he whispers to my ear you are young my man your question is your answer your journey will end on the single day you build your pyramid in the sea when the salt and sand permit the waves will set you free |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow Sam! This is VERY well written. The rhythm/flow was incredible. And the words you chose were greta. I loved the last line. Great write here!!! ![]() [This message has been edited by Spice (edited 08-08-2001).] |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really liked the ending here. The part where the man whispered into your ear was awesome. I enjoyed this very much, Sam! Such sweet words... I haven't seen you around much, but I hope to see more replies and posts soon! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one here. You really wrote a fine poem here. Looking forward to more ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is realy good i really lik it keep up the awsome wrok. Lauren |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sam- Wow! This is excellent! Very thoughtful and verse, and wonderfully penned! ![]() Enjoyed! *smiles* ~vicky "...a heartbeat in every syllable..." |
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samt Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 52Brisbane |
Thanks guys. Love your comments. |
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