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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
i be myself you walk away i be someone else you just dont stay i try to please you i do my best maybe this is some kind of test? why dont you notice me i wish you could see that i can only... i can only be me what you need to do is realize that in front of you i am right in your eyes so if you understand me give me a shout and then you will learn what i am all about k hope yall liked it   |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Like I said on another reply... don't be anyone you're not for someone else. It's not worth it, because you is the best thing you can be  I enjoyed this! I told you you should post it  Nicely done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good one! tender but juicy! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
just like me LOL  thanks robin thanks marie |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Great poem keep up the awsome work I really like it. Lauren |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sup man? Yea well I did enjoy this poem but it wasn't as good as some of your other pieces. Anyhow, hope to see more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"That I can only... only be me." This was my favourite line, there was so much truth in it, ppl can pretend but sooner or later they will shine through and be themselves! I really enjoyed this poem it was a a great read! We all noticed you in this poem and you certainly are a very talented poet! ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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California Rockstar Junior Member
since 2001-08-09
Posts 13State of Confusion |
Wow, this is one of those poems that make me say, "Now that's exactly what I've been thinking! Why didn't I write that for *insert random name* ?" Rock on. |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
very good, heart felt and emotional, i enjoyed it |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Not my fav. of you posts.... But I did like it. I know what ya mean though. Good job! You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Good point. I liked it "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Great write....I relate!!!!!! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
I havent read much of your poems, but this one is pretty good, hope the rest are too! hehe  Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Being someone else in the end will confuse your own personal identity so much YOU won't even know who you are. Trust me, I've been there, done that. Take care of yourself and just be happy with you. If they can't accept it, you don't need them. ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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