Teen Poetry #5 |
As long as we stick to the story |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Baby I have read the script I have seen the dialogs Nothing can tare us apart As long as we stick to the story. Creating our destiny Takes all of you and me Don’t worry we can make it work As long as we stick to the story. Baby we’re gonna be fine We’re gonna be OK We’re gonna be alright As long as we stick to the story ( 2x ) Baby I’ve seen the movie And I have heard the secrets So we will have no regrets As long as we stick to the story. Baby we’re gonna be fine We’re gonna be OK We’re gonna be alright As long as we stick to the story ( 2x ) I could just sit down and tell The story, About you and me. The never ending happiness. Baby we’re gonna be fine We’re gonna be OK We’re gonna be alright As long as we stick to the story ( 2x ) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, this was really cool. I can relate all too well. Fate has a plan regardless of obstacles...and everything can turn out fine in the end. Good job! Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
likin this one a lot! very nicely done!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. Great job here hall! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this one, Hallu, but what secrets? I'm curious what's behind the words here. I enjoyed this Very nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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