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0 posted 2001-08-04 07:43 AM


Baby I have read the script
I have seen the dialogs
Nothing can tare us apart
As long as we stick to the story.
Creating our destiny
Takes all of you and me
Don’t worry we can make it work
As long as we stick to the story.

Baby we’re gonna be fine
We’re gonna be OK
We’re gonna be alright
As long as we stick to the story ( 2x )

Baby I’ve seen the movie
And I have heard the secrets
So we will have no regrets
As long as we stick to the story.

Baby we’re gonna be fine
We’re gonna be OK
We’re gonna be alright
As long as we stick to the story ( 2x )

I could just sit down and tell
The story,
About you and me.
The never ending happiness.

Baby we’re gonna be fine
We’re gonna be OK
We’re gonna be alright
As long as we stick to the story ( 2x )

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-04 09:14 AM


You know, this was really cool. I can relate all too well. Fate has a plan regardless of obstacles...and everything can turn out fine in the end. Good job!

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

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2 posted 2001-08-04 12:18 PM


likin this one a lot!   very nicely done!!  
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3 posted 2001-08-04 01:10 PM


I really liked this one. Great job here hall!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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4 posted 2001-08-05 12:41 PM


I like this one, Hallu, but what secrets?  I'm curious what's behind the words here.
I enjoyed this   Very nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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