Teen Poetry #5 |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Howdy!! I'm finally back from Oregon. It was a very fun trip, but I'm happy to be back. I actually wrote 2 good poems while I was there, but for now I'm just going to post this one. Anyway, I have a lot of catching up to do around here, so I better get back to that, let me now what you think of this one! ![]() EVERY Every other minute I think about you Wondering hat you're doing And if you think of me too Every single night Dreaming, there you are Wishing I could talk to you And that you weren't so far Each and every time I see a star in the sky I wish that I could see you That I had wings to fly In every single prayer I pray God will keep you safe You're doing what you love And staying strong in your faith - Cody - |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Cody-AWww.. A very sweet write... The rhyming was a plus. The flow was terriffic as well. Glad you had a good trip...hope to see the other poem soon. ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good good good very tasty! taste like chicken! lol btw good poem. robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
that was good i like the rhyme, its hard to make words rhyme lol |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
and the pitchfork thing was quite catchy too ![]() |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Very sweet...I liked it alot. Beautifully expressed... ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great Cody. Well done! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Awww!! This is so sweet! I loved this... it really showed how much you care for her, that you wish she was closer, but you're just glad that she's happy because she's doing what she enjoys. Very sweet! I enjoyed this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
This is so sweet... i really liked it ![]() |
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