Teen Poetry #5 |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I've run out of ideas. I'm plum outta luck. But why'd you hug me yesterday when you say I'm not the one. I've run out of time and time is all I've got. But why'd you call me yesterday when you say it's not fun. I've run out of thoughts and the poems that go w/ them. But why are you like that when you say we're just friends? BLAH BLAH BLAHBITY BLAH BLAH BLAH. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Interesting style....this place needs it. I liked it! "Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I agree with Moe - intresting style. I liked it |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I agree, I liked the form of this one. It went perfectly with the tone of this one. Man I have those SAME thoughts all the time. Guys are SO confusing. It drives me insane. 2 imparticular people...I just want to shake em and ask em what the hell is going through their heads. HeHeHe. ANYWAY- I liked this one alot... I thought you did a great job on it. |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey, That was nice!! Short and to the point!! haha I liked it a lot!! Thanks for sharing! Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
sis i am so with you! jeremy says this and then he says that and i get my hopes up and it SUCKS like today when i was workin, i asked him "are u just sittin around here or do u want somethin" and hes like "yeah i want something, but i aint gonna say what" he said this while checkin me out! nice poem btw "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interetsing...i thought how youw rote this was nicely creative...great job. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I'm having one of those "life sucks" times of my life right now. BLAH. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem was nice, but the ending was weird hehe. I enjoyed the poem though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Interesting ending... hehe. I enjoyed this! Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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