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n e where
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 32
Australia

0 posted 2001-07-31 01:08 AM

Oh wondrous mortal
There's such awe in your voice
When you speak to them
A light enchanted spell
Weaves its way through my ears
Everytime you push out those words
With your silver tongue
You amaze me
As I call out into limitless void
'Where is that woman
Where is that girl?
That being who is stirring up this light?'
I call to you
Can u hear me anymore?
Right here in your shadow
My security blanket
My electric blanket too
Always knew how to keep me warm
Dear my thoughts are getting lonely
My heart a weary little flutter it does
Be still my little one
She will come
She will come.

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-07-31 10:26 AM

Have hope and anything will happen. Nice expression. Keep your head up and all that.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-31 10:53 PM

I liked this. I thought your thoughts were written well. Bets of luck to you. Thanks for the read

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3 posted 2001-08-01 02:33 AM

i liked the poem...you expressed yourslef nicely...stay strong.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

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since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

4 posted 2001-08-01 02:34 AM

Great expression in this piece...

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since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-08-03 04:22 PM

I enjoyed the poem. I thought you did well on it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-04 05:38 PM

You did a very nice job on this one. Nicely done!! I really enjoyed this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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