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Unspoken it's free
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Unspoken it's free |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
I've known you for so long ever since the time dorned but now it's time to say goodbye to all the memories we've kept alive for all these years. In this life time so strong learn lessons that goes beyond the love, love of the human heart so I wish upon your wishing star with happy tears. Send your love to me sadly but unspoken it's free give your love to me lonely but unspoken it's free unspoken it's free with the candles blowing in the wind it's slowly burning out empty but unspoken it's free. It's not a sin to cry it's just a way of trying to get our lifes to move on sadly it never helps against wrongs believe I've tried. Cry your love to me orfull but unspoken it's free whipe your love to me senseless but unspoken it's free unspoken it's free with the candles blowing in the wind it's slowly burning out empty but unspoken it's free. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here Hall. Not my fav, but still a good read.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I LOVED the last stanza.. you ended this very strong. I really liked it. nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
this was a good poem |
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