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Teen Poetry #5

Deep Within Me

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

0 posted 2001-07-30 12:54 PM

Go through the inside
Search deep within me
Find what I hide
Let me know what you see
Don't fear my heart
Even if it appears evil
Give me a new start
Let my past conceal
Help purify my soul
Don't allow the black to seep back in
Ignore the hollow hole
It's only from the sin
Where ever I may go
Come with me alone
My truth no one shall know
You musn't portray what I've shown

4/23/01

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-07-30 01:06 AM

Well done here Jessica. Another poem well received by me. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-30 02:02 AM

"Don't allow the black to seep back in
Ignore the hollow hole"
I really liked this Jess #2.
Very well done.
Can't wait to see more.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-08-04 02:05 AM

Very well done! I really liked this one.. I loved the last few lines. Nice work!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-08-05 03:41 AM

Great poem keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-08-05 10:18 PM

well written...you expressed this one nicely.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

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