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Burning Desire....and a hello to everyone
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Burning Desire....and a hello to everyone |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Wow, its been quite a while since I've been here. I've moved around a lot this past year (4 times in 8 months), so it was hard to keep up with everything. Plus I have been trying to get ready for college (I'm getting old). So I just wanted to say "Hello" to everyone, old and new (if you joined in the last 4-5 months, you're new to me). Now that I am pretty muched settled down for at least the next for years, I hope my next visit won't be too far away. Well here is my latest poem: In a state of drunkenness Free from her conscious mind She starts playing with fire All fears are left behind A soft gentle caress A moment that was fantisized Flames of desire growing Covering feelings I have despised The feel of her lips on mine Demanding all my attention Smoldering passion in her eyes Chases away remaining tension Starting the slow journey Of her roaming hands My body slowing burning As she leaves her brand With morning came no regrets Though I was prepared Embers of passion still glowing From memories of what we shared [This message has been edited by Wicced_Witch (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
So I'm new to you. Hi!  I'm Jessica.  Glad you had some time to come back here- cause I would have missed out on a talented writer. I loved this. It was filled with passion, and I was so happy to find that there were no regrets in the morning. I thought it was beautifully written- I felt as though I was there. The Description/imagery was awesome. Hope to see another piece very soon. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Hi!! I am Jessica from Alabama also. Spice is Jesa (AKA-Jess#1) and I am Jess (Jess#2). Nice to meet you!! I am so glad that you are back, we would have missed out on some incredible poetry. I loved this piece.  I hope to see more soon!! What don't kill you can only make you stronger... Love you, Adam!! [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-30-2001).] |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Congratulations on 100 posts first off and this was a wonderful poem. I hope to see more of your work. Until then-- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome back! This was a wonderful poem to announce your return! It is the first of yours that I have read, being that I havent been here quite 4 months. Nicely done. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
aye well i might be new to you...too lazy to make sure (lol sorry) to those in my regular world i'm known as Bergundy, but mostly i go by Fear on passions (very creative huh? haha) anywayz...great poem. i'd try to give you some advice or something, but i can't think of anything that you could possibly do to make it better :-D. welcome back, i hope to see more of your posts. -fear- i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
your discritions was..wow...the whole poem was awesome...and welcome back...well written here. [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 08-01-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Nice to see you back I'm sorry about all the moving.. must be rough. It's good that you're popping to say hello though I really liked this poem. The power and emotions are very strong. Nicely done! I hope to see more posts and replies soon! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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