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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Amber glow Clouded haze Lying low Counting days Sudden calm Music motion In my palm I hold devotion Ease the stress With four leaf clovers Self confess Then pass it over [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
i liked this one, it was sweet and flowed nice.  fall hard, practice harder not to fall |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked the style in this one. An awesome poem right here. These are my fav. kinds because they are so deep in my eyes.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
MMMMMmmm.... four-leaf clovers...! Enjoyed |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
VERY awesome poem... beautiful and powerful in its simplicity. This is one that I could read over and over, and just think about for a long time. I really like this. Nicely done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
i liked the flow |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
You really had a nice flow in there. The symbolism of it all is thought provoking. The title, however...I don't know how it fits into the poem. *scratches head* hmmm... Anyways, I enjoyed the read! Thanks.  -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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