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The secret LIE!
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The secret LIE! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
I have a secret To Bad to tell It might even freeze hell I dont know how long ill keep it Ill tell him someday Or he'll find out someway Its not my fault But who knows what would happen if i told? Im not THAT bold. Our relationship would hault But if i hold it much longer, it might get worse. But im to afraid to tell of course I didnt think wed get so serious! What am i to do, tell him? Now or later? On a whim? Or let him find out on his own and be furios? I have to make up my mind Im runnin out of time PS give me advice! "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aly- you better tell. You'd want him to tell you...show him the same courtesy. Either that, or you guilt will eat you alive. Nice poem though- Showed your thoughts/feelings very well. |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Good poem. I'm with Spice - you should tell. Secrets can tear at your soul. Plus its better now than later when things might get more serious because then it would just hurt that much more. |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
^ agreeing with Jesa... you should tell him or things will just get worse. Been there, done that... I told him everything right from the start and it made things much easier... BTW ~ Great poem!!  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Better you tell him than a little birdy. Good luck with that one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Um thanks But I aint got the nerve to tell! lmao thanks guys "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Alyssa.. tell. Honestly is the most important thing to every relationship. You need to get up the nerve somehow. I think he would rather know the truth than find out later that the relationship's built on a lie. Nicely done, though. I enjoyed this poem. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
sis, you gotta tell. If not, like you said, it could just get worse. You should say something like "I have to tell you something, but you have to promise not to get mad" and hope it works. But you gotta tell. I speak from expirence. You have to tell. *hugs*  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
this was a good poem, makes a good talk show j/k i liked it   |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
i did it! and he didnt even care! "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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