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The One I Love (Now)
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The One I Love (Now) |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
To the One I love I swear, you were sent from above I hear your voice, and everything else just goes. Your voice, so sensual, is all I know. Your touch is electricty to my brain. So seducing, I almost go insane. The words you use change my mood. So sweet and cute, spoken to soothe. When I look into your eyes I have to take a deep breathe and hope it aint a lie I think about our future, just me and you. and i hope all our dreams do come true. Im smiling on the outside im trying to stay focused on the brightside I cant wait till i move to Illinios to start my life with you till then Ill stay focused on keepin it real but we have to make a deal If you say you love me, and you change your mind you have to tell me, dont waste anytime what i feel for you will always be true and I'll love you more, each day that starts new welp...that one is ...undecided..i cant decide if i like it or not?! do u? "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I like this alot...Not exactly my favorite of your posts- but still it's very sweet. You sound so happy. Thanks for the read.  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the flow was nice...the feelings were there...and you expressed it VERY well...i hope all goes swell... ahhh..  *your ryms are like..umm interfereing me as i reply*...hehe...bye Alyssa  [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-29-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here, and although it was my fav it was still a nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
I really enjoyed this post... Good work, and on such a nice topic ALLIE |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
It's not your best, but I like this... very sweet! Thanks for sharing.. Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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