Teen Poetry #5 |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
A penguin you say??? HeHe ANYWAY- I liked this. You captured your pain well. A wonderful free verse. The short lines worked well. |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I really liked this fear... ![]() ![]() What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
This was a nice one Fear. I can relate to this one quite a bit as well. *stuffs it in his library* Keep up the good work! -Kosetsu Of all the things that I confess, |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
nicely done here fear...i felt part of the pain you must have felt when you wrote this as clear as crystal...good work..i hope things heal quickly ![]() ![]() ![]() "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
Gees, thats a very moving poem... However it's awful to hear you're in this situation... So sorry, ALLIE |
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