Teen Poetry #5 |
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I am sorry |
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Neveah New Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 5 |
I know that sometimes my words can be as hard as stone and sometimes my words have left you feeling all alone so please forgive me and hear the words im saying now ill spend my whole life looking for a way somehow to let you know just how precious you are to me Ill use the best words I know but i still wont say it all b/c what I really want to say is what the sun would say to the sky for giving it a place to come alive but my words get in the way... of what I really want to say |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
This is sweet Neveah. Welcome to PIP! This is the first I've read from you, and I like what I see. I'm adding this to my library. I can't wait to see some more of your stuff. -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Yes welcome to PIP, this was a good read... but i have one ? for you.. Did u write that poem titled Forget? Posted by Kral..email me at [email protected] if you did..ok if you didnt, email me anyway ok?? Thanks Jeff ~Jeff~ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Alright- I like the beginning. The end sorta lost my interest...but the beginning half had my full attention. Loved it. Could relate bunches. Hope to see more soon. ![]() |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
for giving it a place to come alive i loved that line..its beautiful....if words are eluding you at this moment i think you should just go ahead and show that person this poem...cus this says most of everything that person might want to hear..( does that makes sense? )...nice poem i enjoyed the reading of it very much thank you ![]() ![]() ![]() "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was fine. I enjoyed this a lot. Well done. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was well written, Neveah! I really liked the beginning. The words are very sweet. Thanks for sharing this, and I can't wait to see more posts and replies from you. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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