frustration (repost from teen poetry #4)

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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-07-12 02:42 PM

I am frustrated.
frustrated with life.
frustrated with dialysis.
i want it to go away!

i am frustrated!

day by day i pray.
but it does not go away.
the illness i have it's stuck,

stuck in my head.
stuck in my body.

please make it go away!

this poem is about my kidney failure and how frustating it is.

robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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1 posted 2001-07-12 03:17 PM

This was a great poem. I dont think that I read it in Teen #4, but I read it here. I hope that everything turns out OK for you.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

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Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-12 04:15 PM

good poem. i hope everything works out for you. God Bless. Keep writing. ~ab~

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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3 posted 2001-07-12 07:50 PM

this hit home for me!...this is what im struggling with too much for words to say everyday...i believe someday our prayer will get answered...until then...stay strong.

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

destiny502
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4 posted 2001-07-12 07:58 PM

im not too good with words but..i wish you both the best.

Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion

Dopey Dope

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5 posted 2001-07-15 04:46 AM

*hugs* I really hope that you get the internal strength to over come this. C'mon now......you can do it!

i'm there to talk to at the wee hours of the night if you need to, you know you can count on me

Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-07-27 09:20 AM

hang in there ok. it's best to be strong and things will eventually get better. *hugs*

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

JBaker515

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since 2001-02-28

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7 posted 2001-07-27 11:58 AM

Yes be strong, like everyone said. And youll be fine.
Cool poem too!!
just work through it...

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

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Limbo

8 posted 2001-07-28 11:35 PM

Sorry to hear about this Robin. Be strong and all that.

Thanks for sharing this piece though. I actually thought it was initially about depession or something as that's the topic of month.

Thanks for posting something different.

~AF~

"Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

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Lynchburg, Virginia

9 posted 2001-08-03 09:35 PM

I'm sorry that you have to go through this, Robin, but stay strong. You're in my prayers. Take care.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

bOoGaSuGa
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since 2001-08-03

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10 posted 2001-08-03 10:39 PM

nice poem robin i hope i didnt get you in trouble earlier cause someone came on your name on msn and i *achem* said some things

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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Sparks, NV

11 posted 2001-08-03 11:42 PM

hey alby just email me if you need some one to talk to ok.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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