Teen Poetry #5 |
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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. ![]() |
There's so many more people here!! AHH!! So much more poetry to read. I'll try commenting on everything...so many poems so little time... I have kinda like a blind date thing tonite. I'm scared! I've only talked to this boy online. I know he went to my school, I looked him up in my yearbook. Ahh...this is crazy!! Even though I've never met you I feel like I know you I don't know what to do. Even though you don't know me You drive me completely crazy Because I think about you constantly. Loving someone new is hard to start But I'm ready to risk my heart Hoping we'll never part. Even though I want to hold you tight It would take all my might For another has my heart, it doesn't seem right. Even though I still love him dearly I still want you oh-so badly. I can love you fearlessly. God sent you down here to me I'll cherish you forever, that you'll see Hoping that you'll love me truly, Even though you never met me... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Cute poem, hope you have fun with Mr. Random. Hopefully he is nice to you, and you 2 hit it off.. HAHA have fun!! ![]() ~Jeff~ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Even though I want to hold you tight It would take all my might For another has my heart, it doesn't seem right." I loved those lines. I know what you mean.... I liked this alot, Raven. Not my fav of yours form/style wise, but the message in it I loved. Hope all goes well on your date tonight. ![]() |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
A good poem. not your best. ut all the same good work. Hop eyou have fun on your lind date, REgina |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice poem, Raven. This was posted a little while ago so obviously you had the date. I hope everything went alright. if it didn't, just pop over to teen chat where there is a hit list. You can add him there. ![]() ~AF~ "Reality is just a crutch for people who can't cope with drugs." -- Robin Williams |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
thats is good! hope everything went great with him! katie "by takeing no risks you are really risking everything" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one Raven! This was completely awesome. You wrote an awesome poem here. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. this is sweet! Nicely done! I know this is a little late ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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