Teen Poetry #5 |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
If I could show you the world now I would I’d bring you everywhere But I can’t your in heaven I have learned leadership skills I have learned life’s not always going to treat me right I have learned so much Words couldn’t explain how much I love you You are alive in my heart I guess GOD wanted to see how I’d make it without you I am doing fine with friend’s family Someday’s are like climbing to the top of a hill and at the end I make it Someday’s are easy like going down the hill This winter I’m going skiing So I can scream and let you know I’m skiing again You’d love to hear it On days that are so nice out I see your face smiling down on me And I just look up and smile back All I want to say is I love you dad You have left a piece of you inside of me And where ever I go I’ll always remember you as a very special dad ![]() ![]() RIP Mikko Talviharju February 21,1942 to December 23, 1999 Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Minna- This was a very nice dedication to your father. I'm sure he'll be watching down on you smiling while you ski. He must have been a really great person. ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nicely done......I've said it always and i'll continue to say it....yer dad is def. very proud of you. Keep that head up. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
this was a very nice read, im sure ur dad is incrediably proud of u. at the begining of the poem i thought u were talking about a crush but now i c that its much deeper than that. ![]() Punk Angel |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Thank you for always replying to my poem this poem was gona be untitled but I never got the chance to write the rest of it thats why its U ![]() ![]() Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was a VERY nice tribute poem for your Dad...i liked the poem...and im sure he is proud oof you...bye Minna ![]() [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is beautiful.. finished or not. A VERY touching tribute to your father. You amaze me, Minna. Your optimistic attitude and outlook on life is really admirable... All your poems touch me in such a way because you're such a strong person. Beautiful work, here. Simply awesome. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
This was very good. I am sure he would be proud of you... awesome tribute. ![]() |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Great words here..he is no doubt proud of you |
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