Teen Poetry #5 |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
3:13 AM. listening to some rap music, just to stay awake. backstreet Boys playing in the back, just enough to break, the tiredness. 3:16 AM. Danish time nothing to do, don't wanna sleep. but I wanna close my eyes so that, I can dream sweet dreams. bout happiness. 3:20 AM. still writting unbelievable, my eyes haven't closed. Drinking some coffee just to stay up, I'm rosting some toast. to awakeness. 3:24 AM. thinking bout the concert, with the beach boys. In Tivoli, Good vibrations, Surfin' USA, together with Mike Lowe. in tenderness. 3:28 AM. I just wanna say to you, all a goodnight. may you have some plessent dreams, and sleep tight. til Christmas. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Hey this is a new one to me, never seen time pass at anactual state of time so to speak. Writing the minutes as they happen... hmmm quite interesting. /Nick/ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sleep till Christmas! whoa.....I CAN'T miss Fall ![]() ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was highly creative. Well done on that! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Hellseyes Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120Kansas, USA |
Good write../Drew/ |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Agree with Dopey=creative. Which i really really like. This was well done, keep it up! ![]() ~Jeff~ |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this... I think it's very creative. I didn't quite understand the meaning, sleeping until Christmas? But nicely done, nonetheless. I enjoyed this. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Liked this...i cant miss fall either ![]() FOOTBALL! |
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