Teen Poetry #5 |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Before those days resume Old faces to remember And new ones for my eyes to consume. Nine days left Before we start again New teachers, new classes, New races to win. Eight days left Until we go back Same old place New books to pack. Seven days left Til summer’s gone Harder tasks With the rising of each dawn. Six days left Six days to prepare Waiting for the tests And see how we’ll fare. Five days left Only five more to go What stories we will tell What things will show. Four days left Less than a week Will I learn the things this year That I always seek? Three days left Growing closer now Until the final hour When they start to show us how. Two days left Only two more Can it be so short a time, Til I stand before that double-door? One day left Dread passing to life School will come With or without strife. ------------------ ![]() ![]() -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Aww I'm sorry! lol I liked the poem, though. Reminds me about how happy I should be that I still have another month and a half left of summer... Anyway, not trying to make you jealous. lol Enjoy the last days while you can! - Cody - |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
...you..have a month and a half left...? ![]() -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I go back the 13th....UGH! Its going to suck so bad. I have actual classes this year..grrr ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice poem...but...your still..lucky..lol..i got "summer school"..:brawling:...im at school everyday!...anyways...bye ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
Dang I go back to school the 27th of August so I'm all good... sorry to evrybody else, but I guess I feel all your pain. /Nick/ |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Hey some of us are still relaxing ![]() ![]() Guess that was the desired effect. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
University starts Aug. 29th for me.....I'm cool cuz I got off highschool May 4th...Oh yea!! Anyhow, great job on this one School boy. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Classes start Aug 20th for me. Hehehe lucky me though...second year of college...and I have the greatest schedule...Three days a week!!! I feel ya though...great description and good luck! ~Nikki~ It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them. |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
Adam - I really like this one. I'm not sure when I have to go back to school, hmm... *runs to go check calender but dosen't have it written down* Oh well, I guess I go back when I go back. =) *hugs&kisses* Love ya! [This message has been edited by Jessica (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
nnniiiccee......i dont go back till augest 28th i think, but this year will b harder for me because im going into highschool :P oh well. newayz nice poem, but do u really feel that way bout school?? Punk Angel |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Do I really feel that way? No person in their right mind wants to give up summer to go back through the dredges of school. But it'll be cool to see my friends again. Only things I'll miss is having the time to work constantly on poems, websites, and the such, as well as getting to know you guys here at PIP better. My schedule's kinda tough this year, especially considering I'll have to have a job to pay for gas and insurance this year. Heh..plus I'll miss getting to talk to Jessica from 12:00pm to 1:00am near about solid. -Kosetsu "Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.......darn schools already started for me.....ugh ugh ugh .......its soooooooooooo boring!!! "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
I fell sorry for you!!! I don't go back until Aug. 30th. But that was a good post. **Sarah |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
OOO, that kinda stinks.. i go back september 4th!! haha ~Jeff~ |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Cute poem, although I'd have to say it brings back memories of school and 6am mornings...*shudder* I'm not a morning person. I have orientation Sept.4...which is pointless because that's when we get our lockers and stuff... I GO BACK SEPT.5!! HAAAAAH! I win. ![]() -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
geez it sounded like a countdown to doomsday. But nonetheless I liked the poem. Keep writing. Regina If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This was really cute Adam! Me? I have to go back September 4th.. he he he.. Anyways, nicely done. I really enjoyed this read. And there's always next summer ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Ha ha I enjoyed this. Ten more days? I go back sometime in September. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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