Teen Poetry #5 |
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You Loved Me Anyway |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Howdy! It's been a bit since I've posted anything here. Actually, it's been a whle since I've even written anything. Darned writers block... Oh well, I think I'm near the end of it now, I think this is decent. I'm leaving on Thursday for 9 days, so I won't be here for a while. I'm going to Oregon, camping on the coast. I'll make sure to bring my notebook so I can write there. See you all when I get back! Here's the song, I had my friend Emily on my mind when I wrote it. So I suppose it's about her. lol I just wrote it, so it's not the greatest yet. It needs some work, so if you think there's something I should work on, let me know. ![]() YOU LOVED ME ANYWAY We met when I was just One or two days old We had no idea What our lives would unfold We spent a lot of time together In our younger days As time passed by We crept our separate ways Chorus: But during all this time You've been here for me You didn't care what I did Or where I would be You loved me anyway There was a time That we slowly drifted away Now those days passed And close beside you I will stay Chorus We never had love That was more than just friends We're there for eachother And I hope that never ends Chorus Yeah, you loved me anyway And I have loved you too - Cody - |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I was wonderin where you were...Have fun in Oregon! Anyway... I liked this alot. It was sweet. Sound like a country song- am I right? |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
You are very right. lol Emily is one of my best friends, and the lead singer of our "band". - Cody - |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Okay. I take it back. Writer's block is still very much there. lol My life is just too darn boring right now, I have like no inspiration, and the only way I can write is if it comes from the heart. - Cody - |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
I really liked this, and I know all about writers block. Hope you have fun in Oregon and come back with some cool new pieces. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
very nice and very sweet. I wish i could hear the music that you've put to it. I really liked it anyway though, thanks for sharing ![]() |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Cody, this is awesome. You never cease to amaze me! Great job! Doesn't writers block suck? ![]() Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I would actualy like ti hear this in song I bet it would rule, wait I know it would rule. Always the great one aren't ya... later. /Nick/ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one! Well done! Oh and have fun in Oregon. God knows that's an awesome place to be ![]() ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
i like this a lot, it shows progression... VERY NICE ALLIE |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Yes i enjoyed this song.. I really liked some of your ideas u put into it.. Great job and have fun camping, dont get eaten by anything!! ~Jeff~ |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Beautiful read. ![]() ![]() Uhm... Well, if it isn't a song, it would work really well as one. It flows just like one. Until next time, Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Yeah, I took this to be a song... Very nicely done, Cody! Good to see you back... and hate to see you leave again so quickly, but have an awesome time in Oregon! ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice to see a song from you...enjoyed the read...you written it VERY nicely. "if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry- |
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