My Love (buh-bye writer's block!!)

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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-07-24 02:23 PM

While thinking about you
Something comes to mind
When I think of how you hold me
At night, in your sleep.

                              You’re the one I dream of
                              When I dream of the one I love
                              It hasn’t been that long
                              But I know what I feel.

A year ago, when we met
I never expected something like this
To fall for someone like you
In the way we met.

                              July eighth, two thousand
                              At the Walkersville carnival
                              I met the one person
                              I want to spend my life with.

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 07-24-2001).]

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

1 posted 2001-07-24 02:31 PM

It paints a picture and lets the reader in a little, coming off of a writers block bites realyy bad but it seems that you didn't lose the talent to write, nice job. /Nick/

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

2 posted 2001-07-24 03:21 PM

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finally, shes over it, and shes still here!! Great poem Tamma! I really enjoyed it.

I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-07-24 07:49 PM

Tamma...this rocks

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-24 08:29 PM

Seems like yer happy

Who's this one about though?
Nice poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

5 posted 2001-07-24 08:32 PM

*sigh* Dopey...I wrote this for a certain someone whom I just spent the weekend with. His name is Albert AKA "The Carnival Dude". He's the guy in the pic with me.

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 07-24-2001).]

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-29 02:26 AM

Congrats for getting over writer's block, and meeting such a great guy. I enjoyed the poem. Nice work!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

7 posted 2001-07-29 09:15 PM

I liked this. The format was appealing.
Glad you're over writer's block and have found someone you feel so passionately about. Thats always a great thing.

wonderful write.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-29-2001).]

Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

8 posted 2001-07-30 12:10 PM

Great work. And congrats on getting over writer's block, I hate when I get it. Good luck with your guy.

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