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Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

0 posted 2001-07-21 05:15 AM

I know you've hurt me
I know you've lied
But I still love you
No matter what I try

I miss you more than words can say
I need you a little more with each passing day
I miss you so much
Your smiles
Your kisses
Your hand being in mine
I miss the utter bliss
The way you held me when I cried
The way you would gently push the hair out of my face

Remember how we would hold eachother for hours on end?
I would lay my head upon your chest and we stare into eachothers eyes.
You would tell me how lucky you were to have me not just as a lover but also as a best friend.

Those days are gone
I need to let go
But no matter what I do
I keep holding on to you

You are everywhere
Whether in my dreams
Or wide awake
I can't stand this pain
I dont even know how much more
I will be able to take

You broke my heart
What more can I say
You ripped my dreams apart
But how much longer is the hurt going to stay?

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

1 posted 2001-07-21 04:03 PM

I can relate to this poem. I really did like it, had a lot of expression. Keep your head up, things will get better with time. Keep up the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Your FAITH is all you need"

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

2 posted 2001-07-22 12:13 PM

I really liked this one. The emotion was definitely there.

I can definitely relate to this. Love's never treated me kindly. All I can say is don't let it get you down. There's always..someone out there. There's gotta be, right?

-Kosetsu

"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-22 12:26 PM

Nikki- This was a write well done.
You showed yoru emotions well.
I can totally feel what you are syaing...And I'll tell you how long the hurt stays as soon as mine leaves...Untill then- Take care.

Karen
Junior Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 36
Utah

4 posted 2001-07-22 12:49 PM

My heart was broken like this about three years ago... The pain is still there, but I have realized that we will never be together again, and I am better for it... it think. The pain will go away. Thanks for the poem.

Keep Smiling,
Karen
"There is nothing more beautiful that a smile that shines through the tears."

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-07-23 06:23 AM

Three years ago you say? You need to do an exorcism or something. If you have any photos, burn them. It's the only way you'll ever get over him.
Sad piece but reality isn't a nice thing. Keep your head up and thanks for posting.

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

Dylan Poe
Junior Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 13
Illinois, USA

6 posted 2001-07-23 09:52 AM

Who can't relate to this poem? The pain of a break up when you're the only one still in love is painful. It's even harder when there's a physical bond and an emotional bond. Time heals everything. Love is found again.

Dylan

If life's a stage
We write the script
Personality the pen
The final act the final part
We all will meet our end

-Thomas A. Plemmons (TAP2)

[This message has been edited by Dylan Poe (edited 07-23-2001).]

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

7 posted 2001-07-23 11:52 AM

This poem smacks me hard. Not to about me but about a best friend of mine who felt the same way. She was in pain and I was there, it hurts... this is one of my favorties as I'm sure you will have more...please? /Nick/

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-07-25 05:06 PM

Sounds like you're going through a rough time. I hope things get better for you. Good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-07-26 01:34 AM

this piece made me sad...such a real and emotional poem...one of the hardest feelings...not able to be with the one you love...and the pain...i can relate.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-26-2001).]

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

10 posted 2001-07-26 03:53 AM

I'm sorry that you have to feel this kinda pain, Nikki. But when you start feeling blue remember he wasn't the one for you and if you really try you'll finally decide that it's time to move on and he isn't worth your time! I love you girl!
Chelsea

*that what does not kill us makes us stronger!*

*I have this theory that if were told we're bad. Then that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

11 posted 2001-07-30 11:32 PM

Oh wow.. I'm sorry this happened. I know it hurts.. but it'll only get better. *hugs*
The poem was well written, very emotional and heartfelt. I think everyone can realte to this one. Nicely done.. I really enjoyed this, and I hope you feel better.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

thedragonthomas
Junior Member

since 2001-07-30

Posts 15

12 posted 2001-07-30 11:52 PM

yes i have felt the pain. twice. this is a beutiful poem and things can get better, they always do.

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